Thornclaw

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Name: Thornclaw
Age: 13 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Personality:

Being a new warrior he is like most: arrogant, overconfident, and plain cheeky. He puts the other apprentices down and even though his future mate is an apprentice at the moment he doesn't treat her well either. (modeled after Berrynose) He cant comprehend that he might ever be wrong and therefore takes chances. He doesn't take critisism well and argues alot. He is considered the clan pain in the ass yet alot of the she-cats pad after him because he is strikingly handsome. He doesn't like apprentices and sees them as below him. Kits are cute but not much use to him. He loves to fight and to show off strength but sometimes has trouble reasoning things. If another clan stole food he would be thinking how to attack them back not why they were stealing food in the first place.

Picture: n/a
Short Description:

Exceedingly handsome tom-cat with gray blue eyes.

Appearance:

Thornclaw is to put it bluntly very sexy. haha his lithe and long figure seems to be all the rage these days. Move over huge "cant move me for anything" boulder cats welcome "cant fit through any space" Thornclaw. His fur is a radiant and beautiful red that goes wonderfully well with his bright green eyes. He has one flaw his battle scar but for some reason the bite on his ear just makes him more adorable. Or so I hear. Cascadeclan may have an Adonis on their hands.

ACTUALITY
Skinnier than most cats his lithe body helps him to fit anywhere. His tail is long with long fur that sticks out in all directions. His back legs are powerful and ready to spring after any prey be it rabbit, thrush, squirrell. His stomach his taught but shows the scars pf past battles. His front legs are long and used to running long lengths. His neck a normal size and his maw set nicely. His huge eyes are gray-blue which seem sort of dreamy.

History:

coming soon.

Family:

No relation that is alive.

RP Example:

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Other:

new! idk I was not all here when I made this bio

[Fernpool]

This one, I won't pardon so easily. >.>

You need to add more about his personality and what he feels about everything not just she-cats. Also, add a tad more to his description about his actual structure not what others think.

History is a must and family is a must. Add as much to this application as you can; beef it out a whole lot more. {And include anything about this she-cat apprentice you can and be sure to post an "add" in the futures board.}

~Fern

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-points to last post. nowhere in the form does it say those are required so you may want to go fix them or i can because i know how to fix them. -

[Fernpool]

Optional?

T.T And I've been doing this how long? God, thanks for poiting that out Bracken. No problem then.

Approve.

~Fern